Creating a Mainstream Artist - Feedback

Positive

• Good in depth explanations and stories for the individual band members and characters.
• Good album artwork and poster.
• Impressive, appropriate release story for your artist/genre and good background story.
• Poster is really detailed and shows really well the characters behind each member. Very skilfully edited.
• Band name & album name are well thought out and appropriate. 
• Identities are successful.
• Great research.
• Album cover is professional and fits well.
• Press release story is really good.
• Clothes and hair show good research and understanding
• Good to show social media (Twitter)..
• Lots of thought and effort gone in.
• Good professional images
• Good font and background on image.
• Good album cover and idea.
• Twitter page inventive and good.
• Great scandal and top notch music video concept.
• Great picture!
• Good how you personalise each member.
• Generally fab!
• Good terminology

Constructive

• Too many band members?
• Don't think Jake belongs in the band.
• Could be a bit more consistent with clothes.
• Band members don't fit together.
• Colours look a bit reggae.
• Too much variety in the group
• Colours look a bit reggae.
• Too much variety in the group.
• Could use more terminology.
• Could include a few more pictures, as some parts of the blog are too text heavy.
• More text needed. Although visuals are good, the detail is a little thin in places.

Some of the feedback  contradicts itself, and this may be because some people haven't read all of the posts. I agree that more pictures could have been used, it is a bit text heavy in places but we included images that were appropriate and these were difficult to find.